Hello @octaviusx,

I'm trying to figure out if this is a study in mental illness or if the story is meant to be humorous. It doesn't really seem funny. I think we need to know more before I make a comment that is meaningful. Right now, there are a lot of unanswered questions in my head. Maybe you can resolve them, or add something to the story that answers some of the questions. Ordinarily, we don't curate stories that feature violence, but here you don't focus on the violence so much as the crazed woman, fearful man, and perplexed detective.

You set up a good dynamic. Getting the reader's attention is the hardest job an author has. You got my attention. I'm willing, eager to read more about this peculiar situation.

Thanks!