Hello @newton666,
We have a strict rule in the Ink Well community: no abuse of women or girls, and no violence against women or girls. In this story, obviously, Mary suffers more than one act of violence.

I appreciate that this story took time and that you thought the plot through thoroughly. If you could manage to tell the story without including violence against women, that would be acceptable.

Also, in the fifth paragraph, there are a few words in Spanish. You probably don't want that included.

Good luck!