Hello @newton666
Once again I find myself regretting that the translation of your story chops the style badly. Considering the effort that goes into the story, that is a pity. Have you tried using deepl? I have more success when I use that application than when I use Google Translate.

As it is, I can hear poetry in your words and grandeur, a sense of destiny.

I'm going to read your story once again, later, in Spanish. It takes me a while but I would like to get a better idea of your style and intention.

Thank you for posting the story on Ink Well.