I second the comments from Inkwell and @jayna, and I add to them.
You have more than met the prompt/skill challenge this week. What a great hook:
"It is not as I had thought, but you must leave now. The future of this world depends on you."
And so we are off as the charming boar leads our heroine through an epic adventure that has the goal of saving the world. It is evident you 'see' this adventure as it unfolds. That takes imagination, not talent. The talent comes in allowing us to see.
This was my first curated story today. Quite rewarding. Thank you!
RE: Pangaea