RE: RE: War Bicycle / Bicicleta de Guerra
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RE: War Bicycle / Bicicleta de Guerra

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There are many sentences in here that deserve special notice, that have biting significance. I choose one to illustrate the brilliance of this piece:

As if evil itself was approaching me, his warm but heavy hand lay on me without any permission

There is so much in the sentence, but the words, without any permission sum up the arrogance of this leader, the absolutism of his command, and the subjugation of those who obey (willingly or otherwise). I've read a lot of stories in my time and it is rare that one surprises me. This one did.

The rebellion of a simple bicycle, willing (yes! a bicycle with will) to sacrifice itself for a greater cause sets a model for others.

I look forward to reading more from you.

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