Hello @fantom22
This is an intriguing story line. Kudos for originality and creativity. As I was reading this (for the Inkwell) I noted that the prompt word 'splash' was missing. Perhaps it is in the story and I didn't see it. Without the prompt, the story might not be curated as well. I think there are places you can put the word in. I won't tell you where because you seem to be creative enough to sort that out yourself.

I'll check back in a little bit to see if this is done.

You are a positive member of the community and that is much appreciated.