Hello @danieldedosd2,
I love this story. You have done your job well. That is, you entertained me, you made me care about Marisela, and your story is believable (within the context of a miraculous universe). There is an arc, with a beginning, a middle and an end. Finally, you show humor.

for those who decided to stay, they set up a hairdresser and were happy forever.

This may be the final miracle of Marisela. The poor 'ugly' girls of La Fortuna were ugly no more.

If I were to read this looking for something to pick on, I would note an occasional proofreading error. I'm not looking to pick on anything. Perhaps you can go back and correct those small things.

Well done!

Regards,
AG