RE: RE: The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #21: Down The Street(short story)
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RE: The Inkwell Fiction Prompt #21: Down The Street(short story)

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Hello cryptofi@cryptofi,
I like the way you develop this story. You introduce us to Mr. Godswill in the first paragraph. You explain the relationship between Mr. Godswill and Henry, so we are not surprised by the older man's intervention. The surprise you save is that Mr. Godswill was once a police superintendent. Lucky Henry!

The ending of this story is very satisfying. Thank you for writing.

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