Hello @coolxxx,
I see that you changed the story but there are references to killing children, and a peasant burned and dragged by a turtle. This horrible, legendary creature is evil and grotesque. Violence is its essence. I don't think you could change the story enough to fit the Ink Well culture. However, I appreciate the changes you have made, and the images you have drawn are quite unique. I personally upvoted them and gave you a tip. It really wouldn't do to have the Ink Well upvote the story. If you read our manifesto (as I quoted to you in the previous comment--yes, that was me, writing as Ink Well) you will see that the violence and gore do not fit in the Ink Well. I wish you well. You have an amazing imagination.