When editing your own work, there's on critical step that you must take.
Now, I still highly recommend hiring an editor, or in the very least using Grammarly and having several friends with a keen eye for editing read your book and inform you of every mistake they find, so that you can fix them before you publish your book.
You can find my latest novel here, in three formats: Kindle, Audible, and trade paperback.
Bodacious Creed: a Steampunk Zombie Western
http://amzn.to/2uLdE1q
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