Hello, @riyandacountri!
Thank you for this contribution. Your review is informative and well-illustrated with relevant graphic and video content. Keep up the good work.
On the content side, I think that you did a good job. The post is editorial, and contains valuable information about the project. However, I must admit that I wish you had presented all the information in a simplified manner. The reason we divide writing into paragraphs is to improve readability. Paragraph breaks are necessary, and each paragraph should discuss one main, identifiable idea.
That said, there were issues of style and proofreading, making your text hard to comprehend at times. I would advise you to consider breaking apart longer sentences in order to enhance the readability of your future texts.
In conclusion, I appreciate the effort you put into your work, and look forward to seeing some improvement in your next contribution.
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