This story started well. I enjoyed it. But I feel it is unfinished. Is there a part 2 to come? Your tags don’t all correspond to the story. You must not use tags which don’t correspond to the story. That’s called “tag spam” and is frowned on by the community. The last 3 tags don’t seem to relate to the story. You don’t have to use all 5 tags.
RE: The true story of my journey from the rought streets of a Pensylvanian city to the suburbs of LA