I appreciate the insight. I do understand it is encouraging criticism ..I encourage constructive criticism as its a great source to grow.

The reason why I used, both first and second person was to try behold a subjective perspective. Is the poet, a drug dealer, or is he the substance abuser. (I ended it with the substance abuser.)

I am no longer on drugs, I have been clean for a while. A moment of inspiration struck that allowed me to put my thoughts onto paper.

I take a lot of belief from your response Hive account@poetrybyjeremy