Steemit Open mic week 75 - ORIGINAL "I'm melting"

Hello new friends!!
Since my first open mic last week I've been so excited to create and share more!
This is a song I've been writing the last few weeks
and am going to start to play with the rest of Bad Camper very soon
So I appreciate any feedback =]!

This song talks about the waking dream state we all find ourselves in at some point or another
when the whole world seems to be whizzing by us and we're simply running on auto pilot
For me it is a reminder to embrace every moment, especially with loved ones, so we don't look back to find they've escaped and we've grown old with nothing to show

Thanks to @luzcypher and @pfunk for facilitating the open mic!!

Enjoy!!

A frost covered window from the leaks in our mouth
your breath changes tempo as the sun comes around
I leave to let you sleep
take the dog and let her pee
finally I can hear my heart beat slowing
and a cold bloody wind blows that's pushing me south
but I can't move an inch so I'm calling you down
it's time to figure out
all what it's about - our dreams

But I will never change
and we'll never change

My thoughts have become still
I'm searching for sounds
our dreams never seem real till our feet touch the ground
will we always be asleep?
living in the dream, thinking we can breath, but never knowing
Till we're old and our kids grow and we shed all the doubt
that we kept in our heads so we would never be without
a way to calm you down
when you're stuck inside your house
and the world becomes to loud
we'll see

but I will never change
and we'll never change

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