I tend to come to the intro posts quite often, and personally i think you can do better, it seems to lack information, it needs to pack a punch, perhaps you should explore the intro posts and see how others have done and how much information they give ;
Like what got you into steemit, what type of art and or photography is your most used or best liked, perhaps what got you into any of your interests .
But !~
Aside from all of that ;
You will love the community here, very friendly and often give good advice !
^.~
Consistency is key, information is a commodity !
RE: Exploring steemit