Excellent! What a compelling and thought-provoking story. You pulled me in from the beginning with the intriguing scene of the women dressed in white gowns in the woods.
I was worried at the point where Nina took the boy's wreath. I felt like telling her, "Drop that! Didn't you get any of the cab driver's gist?" 😒😂
I'm happy Nina got to see her unborn baby. I love stories that explore themes of grief, healing and nature. Your descriptive language and narration is effective. Well done! !LUV !LADY