Truly, that lady saw hell
Where there is life there is hope
Your story is a touching one
I enjoyed it. Also, you need to be careful of the us of your words. Like inside of using “she, her and so on”
Example
when she walked in and started crying bitterly
Who was the person. This would have been better
Mrs Maria walked in and started crying bitterly.
This Carrie’s more message than the first one.
Much love dear
!BBH