Commentary
Hello Reader,
Hi friend, I'm glad you found this piece I wrote. This piece came from my thoughts, my colourful fairyland, my mind palace. Some may call me a helpless romantic and there is no denying that but I know that someday, somehow and very soon I will find the one.
Keep being awesome, staying indoors and wash your hands.
Stay Safe.
Progressive Theme
The poem has a natural feel with no pressure on the subject of love. It tells a story of letting the love take its course while it lays emphasis on risks that the writer is ready to take to keep the love going. It also uses metaphors and literary descriptions to paint relatable imagery using simple words.
Thoughts
I thought about love today. Although most of my poetry is centred on the topic of love but this piece reminds of something, of someone I'm yet to share these many tales of love I write about. I feel the energy of love getting stronger around me. I can tell that I would be pulled into its orbit and be stable like the planets in the solar system revolving around its sun, my sun. Shining on my at day and reflecting its light at night with the moon. Celebrating certain that to be repeated yearly. I know this is coming through and true. I am patient. Love is patient, it doesn't envy.
Dante is here no fear