Zapfic50Monday - Moments of Agony

It's Zapfic50Monday ! Today's prompt is "Moment"

I've been a bit cunning with this one, by writing a sequel to a Zapfic I did months and months ago. The original one was ZapFic50Friday #40 - A Moment in Time - now we find out what happened to Jack....

Everything hurt. He remembered slipping and falling, and bouncing off the mountainside at least three times.

Now, every moment was agony. He could feel broken bones, and knew he had serious internal injuries.

Jack’s last thought before he blacked out was “That yellow helicopter is a bit bloody low !”


Image by NoName_13 from Pixabay

For any of my friends (or anyone else, for that matter !) who reads this and fancies giving it a try, it's really fun and thought provoking. The rules are really simple;

  • The Freewriters Community has a Zapfic post with a writing prompt every Monday alternating between posts up to 240 characters, and exactly 50 word posts.
  • Your response must be posted within 3 days in the Freewriters Community.
  • Please post a link to your entry in the comments section of the prompt post
  • Please use #freewritehouse and #zapfic tags.
  • The important one - YOU MUST use a word/character counter (if you search for word counter on the internet or in your phone's app store you will get a big choice!) wordcounter.net and include a screenshot. Entries without a screenshot will NOT be valid.
  • Please use the prompt provided as you see fit (use your imagination)
  • Try to tell a complete story if you can!
  • The story should only be up to 240 characters long (including spaces, punctuation etc) or exactly 50 words long.
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