Haiku isn't always understandable (to me at least rarely), as it's personal moment between poet, moment, etc... Your English is way better than mine.
In English, since kireis have no direct equivalent, Haiku poets use punctuation such as a dash or an ellipsis, or an implied pause to create a juxtaposition whose relationship was about the two parts.
(wiki says)
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