The Minds Poetry Group Open Mic (3/19/19): Bekanode Reading and Discussion

Brett 'bekanode' reads his Poem Minor I and the minds poetry crew discussion feel and even the construction of his poem...

minor i

in shaded eve,
a sojourner,
lost?

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hopefully.

oh foul stench of cleansing,
what relief you bring.
pain.
bloating.
headache.
is there joy
somewhere on the road of unknown?

|\ Poem: https://www.minds.com/newsfeed/954919603031531520
|\ Animation: Novecento, pianist