This! Is! Yet! Another Awesome Poem!! You wrote: "Old remedy obstructed..." @d-pend "That bleeds forgotten songs Into a canyon—....etc." @d-pend...automatically it made me feel that, life itself is like a rubber, (old remedy obstructed) and TIME represents the stretching of such rubber band (metaphorically speaking)...pressures in life, decisions, gains, loses, etc...all represents the RELEASE of such rubber band...soaring into the unknown (that bleeds forgotten songs Into a canyon—) Great Job!!!
Cesar
RE: Mishmash, immortal (original poetry)