@verbal-d this is good, you even manage to add some vocals to this which was a super bonus but I wasn't feeling that clap to this tune. I thought it didn't match to this vibe, it just wasn't strong enough. Maybe if it was a better clap, it wouldn't sounded better. I remember you telling me that you got a team to do your mixing so I understand why your mixes are not that leveled but this would of sounded a lot more leveled if it had a great mix to it. The mix is okay on this because the kick and the hi hats seem to sound too high on my speakers and the vocals could of been mixed in better too. I like the melody a lot, It makes me feel like I'm sitting underneath a tree on a sunny day and while underneath the tree that is providing me shade, I'm thinking about the pain inside of me and trying to fight my tears back but the melody is just saying to just let it go and just cry it out and as soon as I do that, some heavenly voice comes in (the vocals in the beat) is singing to me and putting their hand on my shoulder. I like this beat overall and I think it was a good instrumental post but I definitely thought it could of been better! Keep it up, in my opinion, this is the 1st instrumental beat I heard so far that matched the theme to @chiefmappster week 4 beat battle
RE: @Chiefmappster's Beat Battle League Week 4 Entry: The Pain Won't Go Away (Original Beat)