Heya @riverflows – didn't have time to read through all of it, but caught a few things in the very beginning!
In this paragraph, the first part sounds incomplete, and it becomes a run-on sentence. Either remove ‘a’ or add ‘platform’. Adding a semi-colon after ‘health’, then an em dash ( – ) after ‘spirituality’ helps break it up by creating natural pauses. Also, add a dash and 3rd 'e' to ‘earth-centered.’ :)
Here, you’ve incorrectly used an apostrophe to make ‘its’ possessive. Common mistake! Not sure what’s happening in the sentence after that...the end of the sentence doesn’t make sense (and also has an incorrect apostrophe in ‘its’) —
‘and the it's link to the STEEM platform.’
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