Oh shit! Now that was an awesome murder mystery. LoL, kinda makes me feel a little disappointed in the one I wrote.

Damn though, this was a pretty chilling Murder story and by the well detailed use of imagery you have incorporated in the fiction, it's no wonder I was completely invested in the story as the plot progressed.

_{Ouu... I can feel the goosebumps!}

Brilliant work! I can't believe the Teacher did it at the end. Wow!

At least, she got what she deserved I guess...