Wow how beautiful, you depicted such wonderful descriptions and imagery in this story of story.

At first, it was quite sad how your MC was grieving over her lost like fairy lover but now that the store is over, I'm glad they got back together in the end. I'm glad she got back together with her handsomesoft lipped fairy :)

A little pointer though, maybe next time incorporate quotation marks inside your storied because reading this was a little confusing. I mean to say, because of the lack of quotation marks, I couldn't quite establish the narration from the dialogue cause of that. It kinda threw me off a little

Aside from that, awesome Story!

Cheers!