Well done! Your research into the language and time period really shows, especially with the social struggles of the Countess' firm obligation to duty over love, while her brother chooses love. I especially like the line "wind and the torrents of cold water rushed into the room", it's a simple but effective description that touches the senses. Congratulations of the Curie!!!

I really appreciate your efforts at continuing the language style and character of my beginning. It's a great compliment!