My pleasure 🤍

You nicely described some of the inner workings of Toby's mind. His way of expressing things, and the way he can be misunderstood. Just a side note, however. Adding some spacing would make the text much

No one is 100% evil. So I had to weight this in my mind because you successfully pulled that off about Martha (And my earlier comment by no means was to criticise). On one hand she stole the kid from his

I feel a little bad about Martha, she probably wasn't that good to him to treat her like that. Well, at least he found his biological family now. Very interesting story and nice use of the prompt word.

They do. 😊 Thank you so much for the wide variety of contributions to the library!

Haha, I had the Amish in mind when I was doing the collage, was supposed to fill it with Amish people. But had to stop at what I did only and call it a night. Thank you so much for stopping by @agmoore

Beautiful story @idlemind. The left side seemed faint and gloomy, while the right light was bright and shiny. I think they balance out that way, too much of either isn't necessarily a good thing. Similar

Nicely done. “Sorry kid, I’ve got a hot date…It’s just one night…could’ve been worse” Ola cracked me up. Yup, seems like the cool type of uncle. Haha Thank you for staying within the rules of our community,

I'm sure Japheth will take good care of his younger brother. Touching story, but couple of notes if I may. I felt the opening statement you started with ("Mum was in her final moments") wasn't

Lovely story @wahyunugraha. I enjoyed the Hegelian dialectic approach even though there seemed to be broader philosophical views other than Hegel. Crowd psychology as far as I know has more to do with

Sometimes it becomes inevitable to find our separate ways from those who we love, I'm glad they reunited at the end however, and surely their relationship would be now much better and stronger.

Wasn't clear from the first dialog or the rest of the story, but I assume Emma died? That's sad, she surely meant a lot to Charlie.

Well it was a pretty good attempt. I'm not sure why you felt that way about it. Not that I can do any better (or even close to that) but I can say that with little more practice you can get the dimensions

I totally get your concern about it. But if you ask him maybe he'd even be excited about the idea even though knowing he'd have to go through that. Otherwise, embrace an extra year of suffering. 😁 (Umm,

Wow. 😍 That is actually amazing! I can't believe you haven't done it before.. "Every artist was first an amateur” Well, looks like you're jumping right into it!! Next step: take it to the streets and

Happy birthday to your partner. 🥳 I might change my son's school to one that's significantly closer. I think you really should, half the distance/time daily is significant! And most likely you'd stop

Sometimes I joke that the perfect story, if I ever write it, will have one word. Hahaha, thank you for planting this idea in my mind. Now I'm thinking of a way to do that.. But even "The End" are 2 words.

My pleasure. Yup, his story shows how stupid humans can be, not understanding love or their own religions. But in the end, they really gave him what he literally was asking for. So 🤷‍♂️

Wow, first of all, kudos for a powerful and very effective hook with so few words! I really felt the tension and the exact feelings of the kids. Them defending their mother, their home. Indeed the kids