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@whoshim
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Christian. Husband. Father. Teacher. Too many interests and too little time! I enjoy sports, reading, and games. I design games and write poems.
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2017-12-20 22:41
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whoshim
poetry
2018-08-09 23:35
RE: Prose Poem: Holiday
I'm a bit late to the party, but I wanted to say that I like how you mix nature and life in your poems. They have a gentle, relax feeling to them. I have lived in cities and in the country, but I have
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whoshim
poetry
2018-06-24 14:47
RE: Turned Tables (Poetry)
I really like this one. That stanza of single-word lines is great. I generally try to follow grammar rules in my poetry, but I really ought to break them, like you did here, since it can have such a powerful
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whoshim
writing
2018-06-20 12:58
RE: Postdiluvian Disorder
I did not say that I consider it the greatest sin. The Fall does have claim to the greatest tragedy in the spiritual sense - separation from God. "Greatest tragedy" here may be hyperbolic. I
whoshim
poetry
2018-06-03 22:34
RE: A Dream - An Alliterative Poem
Thanks! :)
whoshim
poetry
2018-06-01 01:33
RE: Ten - An Alliterative Poem
Thanks! I hope that she enjoys it, though I think I like poetry more than she does. :D
whoshim
poetry
2018-05-24 12:11
RE: Ten - An Alliterative Poem
Congratulations! And thanks!
whoshim
poetry
2018-05-16 13:42
RE: A Handful of Haiku to Greet the Day
I, too, am glad for @dbooster and his excellent haiku articles. I enjoy all of the haiku you have here, but that first one is truly excellent. It has the perfect twist for this day and age. It resonates
whoshim
steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-11 23:38
RE: They Were Great (day 65)
I really like this piece a lot. The feeling of loss is very clear. It is the kind of feeling that I get a lot when I read The Lord of the Rings.
whoshim
contest
2018-05-11 10:37
RE: Are You a Good Writer? Then I Want to Help You! Daily Bread Contest Backed by Whaleshares and Isle of Write Communities
Thanks for doing this! It was a tricky choice, since a couple of what I think are my better poems are not in my usual style (which should tell me something :D ). I will submit one of my alliterative pieces:
whoshim
haiku
2018-03-29 12:45
RE: Old Pond :: Haiku of Japan #100 // Contest inside
Here is my alliterative rendering: Peaceful pond Flying frog Poof!
whoshim
welcometothesombredays
2018-03-21 13:30
RE: Deleted
For me, I always find it hard to write a short poem. Yours here says enough. I imagine more, but I think if you wrote more it would be hard not to make it tedious.
whoshim
poetry
2018-03-21 13:27
RE: Child's Play
Thanks! Yeah, it may have been more realistic to have him NOT run to dinner. :D Maybe I am too fixated on food myself.
whoshim
poetry
2018-03-21 13:26
RE: Child's Play
Thanks for the comment. Sorry I didn't reply sooner. I am glad it was surprising. I was not sure about the title. I wanted it to be meaningful without giving too much away.
whoshim
christianity
2018-03-07 13:16
RE: Home For Christmas - An Alliterative Poem
Thanks! I appreciate it. :)
whoshim
poetry
2018-03-04 14:38
RE: Justice (Poetry)
I feel like it must have been a much earlier version, because I didn't recall anything until the last stanza, which brought some memories of it back. :D That is a powerful ending.
whoshim
christianity
2018-02-26 02:10
RE: Home For Christmas - An Alliterative Poem
Yeah, I understand. There are a number of things I disagree with him about (he was Catholic, I am Protestant, just for starters), but I really like how he used words and how he saw the world. Reading his
whoshim
poetry
2018-02-25 15:05
RE: Prose poem: Sunbeam
I like the quiet peacefulness of this. It really matches the topic of forgetfulness with its dreamy kind of feeling.
whoshim
poetry
2018-02-25 13:14
RE: Doom (Poetry)
You tell a fun story here. I really like the opening stanza. I like the setting of it, and the end gives a bit to think about.
whoshim
poetry
2018-02-24 22:24
RE: Captive (Poetry - The Sims Diaries #1)
I really like this. You make the picture come alive. You breathe life into Arya.
whoshim
haiku
2018-02-24 22:22
RE: Haiku of Japan 81 – 90 :: Collection #9
I really enjoy what you do with haiku. You have picked some great ones and some great pictures to go along with them.
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