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A story of action, betrayals and bad company.
From the beginning I expected an ending like this, full of blood and betrayals, it seems a totally gray story, where the beautiful sky does not exist, I think that in our reality there are as many characters as these, without scruples, full of evil and perverse ambitions, able to do anything to get a little of the treasure.
@sarez, your version filled me more and more with horror (and that's good), imagining those stab wounds and the constant tension in the air, kept me restless, and those last moments between Derek and Terry were creepy, corroborating Terry's darker side, which he exposed freely at the end of your story.
Great entrance. Success!
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