@loulo10111,

I really like this song, it is a deep meaningful one for friends and loved ones. I am glad you can share that sentiment with us in the contest and community. Please don't forget about the important intro stating current Vibes Week Number
I have a suggestion, please try to sing with your natural voice without the reverb echo effect, it is a bit distracting and takes away from the song performance, it doesn't enhance it and you don't need it really

I think the future entries you do will turn out better, and you will also overtime appreciate the natural quality and tone of your voice, just sing carefully, have good breath control to carry the melody structure of the songs you love to hear.
I hope that helps. God bless you