Keep that flow sharp, nice entry, however the beat was way too low, and it didn't create that "feeling" that I know it would if the beat volume was actually inside the video instead of being played quietly on a separate set of speakers in that room you are in, try and improve your sound quality presentation, you got a nice rhythmic pattern, try and emphasize those rhymes more and work on breath control, I look forward to you improving and don't forget to add a promotional video to your entry, a promo video must be less than 30days old, and you must include it by your third vibes entry for week 33 at the latest. Thanks in advance