Sounds like a smooth and energetic love song, it would have been better to hear it with the background music, the nature sounds in the background added to the vibe and ambience, I enjoyed the rhythmic flow and your passion with which you sang, your actual singing voice seems to be straining to hit those notes, mid to high range, try dropping your chin, widening the air flow passage when you sing and aim the notes up towards your tonsils or the top of your head to be able to hit those higher notes with ease and confidence. The lyrics are bouncing and flowing, and you gave a good effort.