@singleboiy

It's good to see more rappers in the Vibes Web3 Music Competition
This was a good effort, solid entry
My critique to you would be to have better breath control
And to rap with more conviction, energy and passion
When rappers rap, they have to rap with believability
Your energy could be much higher and the tone is a bit monotone throughout most of the song
The beat could also be a bit louder
You gotta emphasize and style on certain parts of the song
Switch it up, to keep things interesting for the listener and for the dynamic of the song presentation

Once you truly start to feel the song and be more animated and comfortable with the song
The delivery, performance, rhythm and tone all fall together

Hope this feedback helps you for your future entries
Looking forward to seeing you improve.

-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter& Official Vibes Judge