@shemzee

This was a wonderful original song and performance
You created quite the beautiful art piece, with poetic lyricism
We definitely should fly with the inner love residing in all of us
Just a suggestion, but maybe try one chorus with a climactic
Powerful and dramatic singing of the words to really drive this profound message home
I enjoyed it thoroughly, great job, looking forward to more of your originals

-@Verbal-D Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge