God definitely intended for men to lead, but indeed we need women, it is a beautiful balance. I like your original song concept. Be careful of intonation, your flow for the
Most part is there, rhythmically it could be a bit tighter on beat, but the main issue is the off key notes you sing, once you can stay in key with your melody ideas, I can hear these many original songs you have start to come truly to life how you envision them, keep practicing and thanks for sharing your gift of music and songwriting. You had a profound thought out post as well.