Beautiful story and well constructed 👌🏻👌🏻❤

What a horror story😬😬 You made sat still and wondering, what's going on. Crazy changes into scary creatures. He stood, staring in wondrous horror, at the waking nightmare that played out around him before

At first, i thought the children found gold or big treasure, and then its was skull of dead humans 😬, but still reading further. I found out it was costume skull and the skulls are plastic. Damn you really

Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you liked you it😊

Yeah😂😂 thanks bro

Interesting and short. The story is filled with moral lesson which passes the right message to we humans. Good one brother👌🏻👌🏻

😔😔 she didn't get to meet her Dad. The story was filled with true mother support and love for her daughter, even when her husband was far away she handle everything and tried to fill in the father figure

Delta, you go into the building and evacuate the civilians. Your job would be to get them safely out of the blast radius. Go!" Damn!😮😮 just as if i'm seeing an action movie. Brother, you're so good

Good writing skill. Two sisters trying to defend themselves from a mad beast 😬 I enjoyed it, though i was lost 😑, but i found my way 😂.. Beautiful story👌🏻

Lol..i felt the same way. When i was writing the story 😂 Thanks for reading bro.

Thanks bro

Thank you so much for your support. I'm grateful 😊🙏🏻

This is beautiful, Bro you really took your time in writing this interesting story. Your mind is like a machine. Damn your creative. How you turned the writing in the notebook to be about the boy, is something

Reading the story, i felt it was real. So touching and sad. His happiness is the memories of his daughter and wife or being in a dream world with them. Beautiful story❤❤👌🏻

Sure, i do my best in engaging in my fellow writers post. 😊 Thank you for your support.