Thank you for sharing information about the Sentinel project.

I appreciate the information provided. The post is extensive with the app features, uses, and your experiences. I even value your thoughts on how the project could be improved. I think it would be more valuable if you could put those ideas on the GitHub issues.

On the presentation side, the post had many writing imperfections, and I will cite a few examples.

To stay anonymous online, you have to solve the internet on a virtual private network.

Here, solve, or surf?

As far as I am concerned, it does not crash neither does it hang.

That is confusing because of a comma. A comma is missing after the ‘’Crash’’.

There are many more proofreading issues in the post. Most are grammar and punctuation errors. I would advise your dedicate more time to proofread your texts. Also, tools like Grammarly could help spot minor issues.

Again, thanks for your contribution. I hope to see some improvements in your future posts.

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