Great story, as always. Children do have a knack to challenge and question every single thing, particularly when they're being told a story, and it takes a lot of patience of the storyteller to be able to improvise as they go along and make it to the end. You captured this really well. Our tutor seems to be spending a lot of time biting his tongue though he was a good sport to rock on the horse, at least until he was thrown off. 😅