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Read. Write. Eat. Music. Sleep. Repeat.
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2018-03-02 23:06
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poetry
2018-05-29 01:37
RE: SACRED PLACES {An Original poetry} Day 81
This is nice, though the language is a bit difficult. A person reading just for pleasure might stop on the way. However, the poem is wonderfully crafted and shows craftsmanship. Well done.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-29 01:35
RE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 79 "New Slaves"
This is cool, the language is simple and easy and communicates a message clearly, without mincing words. Great job.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-29 01:32
RE: 100 Day Poetry Challenge Day 81 "Stunt On The Haters"
This is nice. It is confident and self-assuring without being mouthy and showing off.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-26 17:34
RE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68
Thank you @acousticsteveo
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-21 17:11
RE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #74
Thank you so much too. I'm happy it helped.
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steemitpoetrychallenge
2018-05-20 17:07
RE: Speaking My Truth-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Seventy Four
I love this! It's witty and beautifully crafted, self-confident without being conceited.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-17 09:00
RE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68
Thank you for your honest opinion. I appreciate it. I've always thought home is not a specific place. Home is created wherever one wants it.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-16 11:36
RE: The Smell of You - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #67
Thank you
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poetry
2018-05-14 06:47
RE: Day 66 - Thicker Than Water
Good poem. The rhyme is is good and kind of different. I wonder at your fondness for long lines of poetry
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poetry
2018-05-14 06:43
RE: Day 67 - Nature, Nurture
Y'know, whenever most people write about nature, it's mostly descriptive. Your writing is different. Sure, it's descriptive but it's also different. It speaks about nature in a whole new light. I loved
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-13 07:02
RE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #60
😂😂.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-13 01:43
RE: 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #66
I'm glad you related to the poem. There's sth freeing about being away from the fluorescence of artificial lighting and noise of human creation and being alone with nature. I'm sorry about your husband.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-12 11:22
RE: I Am-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Sixty Five
The rhythm of the poem is beautiful. And the persona's voice is strong. It encourages the reader to be too.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-05-05 01:15
RE: My Powerful Lesson-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty Eight
I like the open honesty in this poem. It's beautiful and strengthening, in a funny sort of way. I feel as if the persona is relieved she shared and makes me want to share.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-29 17:42
RE: Our Own Masters-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Fifty Three
I could actually feel movement from the poem because of how its shaped. I don't know if that was intended but it's certainly a good effect.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-27 22:09
RE: Ink Up - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #48
Well, it is. Awesome actually.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-20 16:27
RE: Untitled - 100 Days of Poetry Day #40
Well, I'm still searching for my answer.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-19 06:45
RE: A Gentleman's Anger - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #2
Thank you. When I was through writing it, I felt like a little child watching something he couldn't control. I think that's how my narrator felt. Is that weird?
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-19 06:41
RE: Fluid - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #8
Thank you for taking the time to read.
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steemitschoolpoetry
2018-04-19 06:40
RE: Her - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #9
Thank you. I wasn't quite sure I nailed it but I feel much better about it now.
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