OHHHHH.... GENIAL!!!
Caramba, ¡que creativo! Este relato está realmente bueno, aunque es cruel.
Escribes maravillosamente. Te felicito.
Saludos y bendiciones.

OHHHHH .... GREAT !!!
Gee, how creative! This story is really good, although it is cruel.
You write beautifully. I congratulate you.
Greetings and blessings.