Hahaha bro. Thank you for trying. The issue is this. These are mostly words, you know, not full-blown designs and in these words are the message of the design. Being a shirt that people just see passively, it is important for the words to be catchy and with context. You are really doing well but this fits better with say a webpage that people will spend time on to look. On a shirt considering that i want to pass a big message even passively, the words need to carry context design-wise