It was well written and quite frankly you beat me to the punch when it came to Musk but than you have to ruin the whole thing by saying off the wall shit like:

Today if a child draws a picture of their daddy shooting a gun they can be expelled from elementary school, taken from their families, and imprisoned in psychiatric institutions where they are drugged and psychologically tormented, sexually deranged, and surgically altered without their parents even being informed.

If on a public forum blog with thousands of followers where trying to get the message out of what we are facing, and I wholeheartedly believe you as I can see it myself also, throwing in something as far out as that throws the whole thing right out the window, gets you labeled as a basket case and throws the case in point right out the window.