Get ready for more! Ideas are coming, so I hope to soon have a part two for you to read. :)

Really, thank you so much @jayna for words like this. Simply, when I look at my story, I don't have that impression. I think that it needs more of writing to be done and I don’t see these things. I guess

Thank you very much @jayna. It is so nice to hear such words from you! I am very glad you like it, also I hope that next parts of this story of mine will be interesting for you and of course, I would like

I look forward after that to hear your opinion! :D

Thank you.

Great writer. You should definitely check it when you have some spare time. Of course @jayna, here's my discord stormlight24#9525, write to me so we'll arrange everything.

Thanks. I had some weird ideas, so I wanted to try a story like this. Thanks again for the kind words and support.

Thank you very much for your insight. I'm glad you liked the story, or part of it for now. I tried to create a story that took a completely different approach to fighting 'evil'. We will see how the idea

Thank you very much. I have some ideas for development, but need some time for shaping it in a good story. :)

The story is great, but unfortunately it's already been published so it's not in line with our community rules so I can't vote it. I hope you will join us with some new and great stories. A great writer

I try to come up with ideas that I currently have. I will do my best not to make the next one about war and suffering. Thanks for such a nice comment, I'm glad the elements I wanted to include in the story

MD as a medical doctor. :) I will find some time, for sure. :)

Since yesterday - school is over! Yesterday I became MD, so it is gona be hard but on some other level for me. :D Thanks for your warm welcome. :)

Oh man, what a story. Best short story I've read lately. I really like that you have introduced all the elements of fiction that are necessary through your storytelling. You gave names to everything and

'' I've buried a number of people during this war, people who actually meant something to me, friends, comrades, family. '' To me this highlights story of yours and it seems to me that it tells a lot about

I apologize for my late reply, some commitments in my life have hindered me. But I'm here now, and I'm really glad I read your story. I have to admit that I saw the same thing as a continuation of my prompt

Great. There are enough elements of mystery (why the wall is there, what material it was made of, and how they got out of the wall), while at the same time depicting the isolated life they led. I hope

Concision is what gives this story its strength, at least I see it that way. Excellent work. :)

And we're looking forward to reading your stories or poems. Welcome. :)

Thanks for the delegation, we hope this will be a place for all creatives and dreamers! And that our community will become a place of quality prose and poetry. :)Welcome.