“No one in this world can love a girl more than her father.”
—Michael Ratnadeepak
How do you know if you have a great dad? All of them are good fathers but for some, they claim that have the greatest dad. Being a father is not just providing our family’s financial needs. Family is not about money and material things that gives us temporary happiness. It is about LOVE. Fatherhood is a great responsibility that assigned by God. Fathers obligation is not just being a provider but a source of wisdom and strength. He should be the leader of the family in creating and molding valuable individuals that will become beneficial to the community.
On our chosen best blog, the author expressed her gratitude to her loving father. This chosen blog was reviewed with jurisdiction and now sharing to all our co Steemians.
The author’s format is clear and understandable. She used traditional center format for her blog. Although there are minimal grammatical and typographical error, still the blog came out fine.
We suggest that next time, the author may use proper nouns for identification.
In my father’s journey of being a father, I’ve watch him persevere…
She may say, “His journey of being a father, I’ve watch him persevere...”
Punctuation marks was used properly. All in all, the format itself was so far good for a simple yet meaningful blog.
Format Rating:85 %
CONTENT
The article is about the author’s appreciation on the sacrifices and deeds of her father to their family. While reading it, you can feel her emotions and the love that she has for her father. She also stated the things that she learned from him. She delivered her thoughts properly and expressed herself so much on this blog.
We suggest that on her next blog, that she may add inspirational quotes to make it more inspiring.
87%
VISUALS
The blog was supported with photos that are vibrant and clear. The pictures she used (more of selfies) delivered the message of what her blog. We hope to see more photos next time. Picture of her family made it more inspiring. Keep it up!
Visual Rating : 85%
There is a saying came from a contestant of Ms. Universe, "Just being a woman is God's gift that all of us must appreciate. The origin of a child is a mother, and is a woman. She shows a man what sharing, caring and loving is all about. That is the essence of a woman."
How about the fathers? The essence of being a father is not just raising and providing the family’s needs but also having an important role in shaping and molding his children’s values, character and way of thinking. He is influential in being the role model and leader of his family.
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