You write very well in my opinion. It's a pity there's so little support so far... But keep going, you can drown in your story in a good way.

I was at school that day. The news didn't stop showing the event, even though it wasn't my country. We didn't understand anything at all. It looked like surrealism. Later I realized that there would be many such moments in my life... When you move, it's like being in water.

Take care of yourself!
!PIZZA