Hi Cleo
Good to have you on hive sharing with us your stories and creating feelings too. This is an amazing piece, fiction I guess but if not its a wonderful feeling all the same.

I'd like to introduce the few writing communities we have here on hive
• Freewrite community
• Inkwell community.

Please do well to subscribe to these communities and share your amazing work.

PS: Images have a way of triggering the mind of readers how the corelate with the story and the story teller, just a small advice to use have a pictorial story too alongside the wordings. There are tons of free images out there on pixabay and the likes, Just do well to source all images.

Cheers!!!