I have to say THANK YOU, first of all, for playing along!!

2nd. I loved the concept of the first part but was confused in a few places. After reading your final attempt, I loved how much clearer the story was and how it showed that her husband loved her and was not just a cranky old man. :D You gave depth to the main characters they did not have in the first part.

The doll is even creepier :D

WELL DONE!!