I was not feeling well Yesterday. I saw that you had posted and was excited but wanted to feel better before I read your story. After a few hours, I still wasn't feeling well so this was my mindset when starting to read your story...

By the time I wrote my comment my headache was forgotten. Your story pulled me in and kept me. The main character I loved and hated...... :D

I wanted to know more at the end too!

So all I can say is your story flowed perfectly.

My reaction was real. I was so blown away I WAS at a loss for words.

It was written that well.