This is quite the long form essay, at 1000 plus words. It is not exactly a short segment LOL
However I like the two stories and how they explain how our single brain, two eyes and two ears may not collect all the information about a project or investment to give us a complete picture. I admire these two analogies you used, as they are easy to understand and show applicability to everyday life. I don't know anything about SEO excedpt that you should add words at the end of each paragraph which are the main subject headings to increase your SEO listing.